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I see that I've made a few grammatical errors and some of my sentences could use a bit of rewording. My professor said that some of my statements were a little bit cliche, but the heart feels how the heart feels. He also didn't understand some of my analogies so I will try and make them clearer when I revise my essay for the final time. Once again I found myself faced with the challenge of choosing something near and dear to my heart for the college application essay. I know it sounds like I don't cherish a lot of things, but I do and I can never think of them when they're needed. Luckily I thought of one of the most important things to me as a high school student. My love for the great sport of Track and Field. My professor had already informed us that a large majority of students that apply to college write about sports, but I wanted this essay to be different from the others. Whether I did that or not is up to the reader to decide. |